Nice.
Did Ru's and Ovine low the other day. My sequence on Ru's was a little different - couldn't do it with the big reach to the sloper so shuffled along on that bit but otherwise the same...
I was starting Ovine Low Left with the good crimp and an undercut on the lip, feet R at back of roof then out to the inter you use. Your lower version looks good, may try to get there again whilst it is dry - I had just told bonjoy I was done with that bit of valley!