It's a good start but the first cocktail is my favourite and I wouldn't be happy if it was made to that recipe.
Soda, WTF!
Also, my pet hate is ice cubes, if there's a requirement for ice cubes the glass should be full of them. 2 or 3 piddly ice cubes melt and make your drink watery, there should be enough in there that the whole drink stays cold enough that by the time you've finished it, the ice-cubes are still all there (more or less).